Born Muslim
20-06-05
Born Muslim,
My soul bound to the Creator,
From the beginning of time.
I open my eyes in a strange world,
It teaches set things, to be silently complied,
Expectations are forced on me.
The tentacles of life tighten around me,
Blocking my sight, suppressing my conscience,
Unwilling to let go.
My identity diffused within the rubbles of existence,
Life’s direction off-course,
I no longer know why I live.
My soul is withered, thirsty,
Searching for the way,
To be reborn and live again in God’s way.
8 Comments:
IT DOESNT RHYME!!! - WHEN DO U DO ONE THAT RHYMES!!!!
Sunday, June 26, 2005 7:14:00 PM
Ok - im sorry, should appreciate ur wonderfully writen poems!!!
Congrats anyway!!
u seem to have a lot of spear time, cause u can manage 4 blogs and write sssssooooooo many poems!!!
Sunday, June 26, 2005 7:18:00 PM
I don't care much for poems that rhyme. You'll notice my poems are unique in that some parts rhyme, others don't. ANd these poems weren't written now, last year and not at once.
Sunday, June 26, 2005 9:46:00 PM
helloo. came across across your poems- this is a different anonymous by the way- and i think it adds a nice quality when a poem isn't all glossed over with perfect rhyming patterns.. your work is really something beautiful.. you've put nicely into words alot of my thoughts and reflections :) keep writing.
Monday, June 27, 2005 7:42:00 PM
I have an inkling all the anons belong to the same family! Am I right?
Tuesday, June 28, 2005 11:41:00 AM
Nope - not one bit, sorry to say, but i've never meet this other anon person
Which means that i am the first anon, and im really getting sick of it (maybe, if ur lucky i'll reveal my identity)
Tuesday, June 28, 2005 10:43:00 PM
This is a dif anon again. I love ur poems. u dont look that poetic, but u sure hav some talent.
Monday, July 04, 2005 5:14:00 PM
that's exaclty what I think if I read over my writings, they don't sound like poetry. I guess they're just my own perspectives
Monday, July 04, 2005 5:18:00 PM
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